BY MY ONLINE CANDIDATE ANU FROM THE GULF

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THE QUESTION AND THE ANSWER

Farming is greatly promoted in richer nations than in the poor?

Some say it is so because farming these days is expensive while others say this disparity is due to some other factors.

How do you see these two views on poor farming in poor nations?

It is an undeniable fact that, today, developed nations provide more importance for farming than underdeveloped countries. Some believe it is mainly due to rise in the cost of cultivation whereas, others establish that certain other factors also contribute to the same. This essay will discuss both the aspects to reach AT a prudent conclusion.  

To begin with, one of the most important factorS which make farming an unapproachable activity in poor countries is certainly the expense. Nowadays, modern sophisticated machines and techniques are used in agriculture for better yield. THESE ARE CUT FOR THE RICH ONLY. But poor countries could not afford theSE expenseS. In addition, Organic farming is more popular but the production cost for organic foods are typically higher than theIR conventional counterparts. Thus, farming becomeS UNPOPULAR in SOME POOR NATIONS.

Furthermore, there are a lot of other factors which can equally attribute to reduced farming in poor nations. Firstly, most of the people are unaware of the modern cultivation methods and even THERE IS lack of access to formal education and skill training. Besides, there is POOR availability of irrigation or high yielding crops. Secondly, such countries have LIMITED measures available to protect their farmland from adverse climatic conditions like famine, wild fire, flood and so on. Finally, off-farm income haS grown. So, rural people are engaged in non-agricultural employment. These are some of the OTHER aspects which UNDERMINES farming in DEVELOPING NATIONS.

 Overall, I believe that both these aspects profoundly lead to lack of FARM production among poor nations. The developed nations can give a hand to help the poorer ones in the field of agriculture.